One of the most important and interesting American poets is Emily Dickinson (1830-1886). She wrote nearly 1,800 poems, and only a few were published during her life. Many of her poems render into verse her complex thoughts about love, hope, loneliness, death, and immortality. Her style was unusually terse; she never attempted epics, dramas, or sonnet sequences, like the poets she loved: Shakespeare, Milton Wordsworth and Keats. Yet, her poems pursue emotional and mystical depths with no less profundity than those great poets who preceded her.
Dickinson possessed an extraordinary capacity to devise little tales that her idiosyncratic imagination envisioned. Here is a poem that tells one of those tales:
"A Bird, came down the Walk -" (359) A Bird, came down the Walk - He did not know I saw - He bit an Angle Worm in halves And ate the fellow, raw, And then, he drank a Dew From a convenient Grass - And then hopped sidewise to the Wall To let a Beetle pass - He glanced with rapid eyes, That hurried all abroad - They looked like frightened Beads, I thought, He stirred his Velvet Head. - Like one in danger, Cautious, I offered him a Crumb, And he unrolled his feathers, And rowed him softer Home - Than Oars divide the Ocean, Too silver for a seam, Or Butterflies, off Banks of Noon, Leap, plashless as they swim.
This disturbingly wonderful poem’s first stanza certainly shocks the reader with its “raw” savagery. The initial line, “A Bird, came down the Walk -” seems quaint and even charming. Then the speaker joins the little drama, “I saw,” as an unseen spectator to the bird’s rapacious murder of the helpless “Angel Worm.” What might not be immediately clear from the first stanza is the speaker’s psychological perspective. Her perspective in this first stanza appears “objective,” as if she were simply observing and reporting factually what she saw.
But a poem by Emily Dickinson is never pure, objective observation. In stanza 2, we see the first evidence of the speaker’s perspective shifting from objective to subjective, to the speaker’s imaginative interpretation of what she sees and feels. The bird is charmingly quaint again, though now that characteristic is attributed to the bird rather than simply inferred by the reader’s natural response to the image of the bird on the “Walk.” After the bird sips the “Dew,” it encounters a “Beetle,” and politely chooses to move aside to “let” the small creature to pass. Through the speaker’s subjective perspective, the bird assumes consciousness and the human principle of etiquette.
As she follows the bird’s movements in stanza 3, the speaker slides from an objective perspective to a fully subjective one. She notes that the bird’s eyes “glance” around “rapid[ly],” but then says, “They looked like frightened Beads, I thought.” Notice the subject/verb that ends this line: “I thought,” and compare it to the subject/verb that ends line 2: “I saw.” At this moment in the poem, Dickinson begins to turn inward, away from the physically visible to the vision within her imagination. As she does so, her language becomes figurative: “They looked like frightened Beads.”
Her inward turn continues and expands through stanzas 3 and 4. In stanza 3, she imagines herself threatened by the bird, “Like one in danger,” and offers him a propitiatory “crumb.” What she expected or hoped for from this gesture is unknowable, but what takes place next is metaphorical and mystical. The bird becomes seemingly ethereal:
And he unrolled his feathers, And rowed him softer Home - Than Oars divide the Ocean, Too silver for a seam, Or Butterflies, off Banks of Noon, Leap, plashless as they swim.
The first metaphor and image is the bird unrolling his feathers as his wings open to lift him aloft. Then the speaker sees the bird as an image of a boat rowing through the “Ocean.” Finally, the bird becomes an image of “Butterflies,” silently leaping and swimming, rising through the incorporeal noontime sun. Instead of simply flying away, Dickinson’s metaphors infuse the bird’s flight with an image of an ascension and endow the bird with a metaphysical presence.
Dickinson was influenced by the poetry of Wordsworth and the essays of Emerson. Both of these men found something sublime in nature. For Dickinson, nature is not simply a vehicle for encountering the sublime. Nature is cruel and savage; yet it is also beautiful and transcendent. As with so much of her poetry, Dickinson finds simple contradictions in this world and life and transforms them through figurative language into profound paradoxes.
